Wow, that is so amazing
Such very true profound words
very wise poem

You never cease to amaze me. That was a very thought provoking, deep poem. (not to mention awesome for the LOTR reference alone ^_^)
I especially liked the last two lines. "Sometimes the best is found When you think you're lost" I've never thought of life like that before, and now that I am I find it to be very true.
Excellent job as always.
~SCR

I love bumper stickers. And I love that line! I actually made up a tune to that poem, since I thought it needed music... I can't read it without that playing in my head now.

Great little poem type thing (I know, eloquent, aren't I?). Those last two lines sum up life very well, I think. Great job!

~Emma

A quaint little poem. I like parts of it, but some parts of it are sort of too... I can't find the right word for it, but maybe sugary works? No... I don't know, but you get what I mean. I like the premise, it's very true, and you know, I've never thought of that. To wander, but not be lost... it is true.
The Book equals the Bible, yes? It is a very handy book. :)most of the truths in there are self-explanatory.
So, though the content is good, the poem itself lacks... something... I don't know exactly what. I only know it's not the best thing I've read of yours. Keep writing, though.

:) i love that quote. huzzah for bumper stickers and LotR. i must admit to not being such a follower of the Book, but i agree with everything else.

Pretty deep. Made me stop and think for a bit, which is a rare thing from poetry on this site lately. Keep at it.