Please continue!

I really like it...could turn into a great story...Pretty Please continue! ...Oh yes, it would also be very much appreciated if you would finnish the other stories I like, (all of them, to be specific) =}
Or I will have to think up some mean little prank for next time I see you. :) he-he
Signed,
Your annoying cousin in K-falls

Oh my word honey, you are absolutely blessed with a true God-given talent for writting! I sure hope you recieved an 'A' for this short.( If not I will be the first in line to slap your teacher upside the head.) I know I've said it once, but I will say it again... I always enjoy your work. You did a wonderful job showing just what 'Love Thy Brother' means. It would have been so easy for Michael to have become 'worldly' and exact revenge on his younger brother. I mean he had the chance, the means, and the motive all right there in the palm of his hands, but he chose to rise above it instead and spared his sibling. Thank you for blessing my day with your work! ~Scottie

I liked it. You have good story ideas.