Great rhyming scheme. I am in complete agreement with you!

Valentine's day is sickeningly commercialized and superficial, as is the "love" displayed by the exchange of Hallmark cards and Hershey's chocolate.

Good poem.

Good, good. Sometimes I feel like that. Keep writing.

This is so true. I think about this every time Valentines Day comes around the corner. Excellent job.

Rowan.

I agree Valentines day just sucks.

SirScott

excellent rhyming!

some lines in here totally made me laugh

like how you took a different view on valentines day- mocking it without being overly obvious

love the last line- i agree :)

great job!