the emotions of this piece are conveyed very well.

great flow of rhyme! loved it!

wow nice I love the title and it's content really great XD

I love the style of this poem. It flows so well without losing any of its meaning. Be honest, though, did you need a dictionary to come up with so many words that end in -ation? I would have. ;)

Wow. I don't think there's ever been a poem I could relate to more. I love it. D

*added to favorites*

FUCKING AWESOME! don't know why, but you have such charm XD

Nice work with the words. This one sorta reminds me of a few realationships. Keep up the good work.

MS