|Reviews for Fatal Temptation|
| purple x pen 2/20/08 . chapter 1
the emotions of this piece are conveyed very well.
| phantom66 8/29/07 . chapter 1
great flow of rhyme! loved it!
| Im gonna make it rain blood 6/15/07 . chapter 1
wow nice I love the title and it's content really great XD
| Jen H.M 6/5/07 . chapter 1
I love the style of this poem. It flows so well without losing any of its meaning. Be honest, though, did you need a dictionary to come up with so many words that end in -ation? I would have. ;)
| Ainu 2/1/07 . chapter 1
Wow. I don't think there's ever been a poem I could relate to more. I love it. D
*added to favorites*
| CARRIE 2/1/07 . chapter 1
FUCKING AWESOME! don't know why, but you have such charm XD
| Master Shu 2/1/07 . chapter 1
Nice work with the words. This one sorta reminds me of a few realationships. Keep up the good work.