aww this is really sad (, i like it though

I like this a lot. Especially "The scars will have faded

into teeny tiny reminders of our addictions and

no one will know and no one will care, except

for you and me." I like the idea of no one knowing what happened and what we all did when we were teenagers. Like we'll all be forgiven and no one will judge you for mistakes you've amde in the past. Great job on this I really do love it. Keep writing forever and always.

Jessica

I enjoyed this poem, but I think it may be more effective if you broke it up into more stanzas. It was a little difficult to read at times because of the form. But other than that wonderful work.

I really really like this.. the format was awesome and the whole concept was great.. i can definately relate... great piece