I absolutely loved this. I didn't fully understand the first part and i suppose it could be made clearer, but I personally think that it will lose some of its magic.

I can't tell you whether or not I feel what you felt when you wrote this and experianced it, but I can tell you that I feel something. This poem does mean something to me and it hits very close to home. The words are beautiful, as is the imagery - you seem to be somewhat of an expert at that.

Wow, that was a pretty cool dream you had there. Very nicely portrayed. I really liked how the last line just tied everything together and just made it work.