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Reviews For: I Don't Mind OR Ironically Afraid

Wolfcry-Sama
2008-06-08
ch 1,
abuseThat first verse completely hooked me. Awesome song.
half-sketched.staccatos
2007-10-19
ch 1,
abusekonnichi wa

I *really* liked the first stanza -- it was my favorite: "I don't mind standing on the edge / but the thought of falling scares me to death / I don't mind standing in the rain / but my fear of drowning shall always remain."

"But I fear the loneliness I've always known / I've never known which way to go" -- It sounds sort of like it's repeating because you used the same words in both lines. You might want to change the wording of one of them.

A really great poem. :)

Zaijen
-Shan-
The Reverse Edge Blade
2007-03-19
ch 1,
abuseOh, that was a beautiful song! So full of depth. Your words were so meaningful. This'll go in my favorites, it was so beautiful.
The Reverse Edge Blade
Queerest
2007-03-03
ch 1,
abuseAwesomeness...I wish this were a real song...
xo Secrets
2007-02-03
ch 1,
abuseFirst Verse Conveyed A Lot Of Emotion & Completely Hooked Me In. & The Bridge... Wow. Quite Beautiful. ^_^

Lots Of Love & Best Wishes
~ xo Secrets
hateandkill-D
2007-02-01
ch 1,
abuseNot bad. I like this. Nice job! Keep it up!
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