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Reviews For: I Don't Mind OR Ironically Afraid
Wolfcry-Sama 2008-06-08 . chapter 1
That first verse completely hooked me. Awesome song.
half-sketched.staccatos 2007-10-19 . chapter 1
konnichi wa

I *really* liked the first stanza -- it was my favorite: "I don't mind standing on the edge / but the thought of falling scares me to death / I don't mind standing in the rain / but my fear of drowning shall always remain."

"But I fear the loneliness I've always known / I've never known which way to go" -- It sounds sort of like it's repeating because you used the same words in both lines. You might want to change the wording of one of them.

A really great poem. :)

Zaijen
-Shan-
The Reverse Edge Blade 2007-03-19 . chapter 1
Oh, that was a beautiful song! So full of depth. Your words were so meaningful. This'll go in my favorites, it was so beautiful.
The Reverse Edge Blade
Queerest 2007-03-03 . chapter 1
Awesomeness...I wish this were a real song...
xo Secrets 2007-02-03 . chapter 1
First Verse Conveyed A Lot Of Emotion & Completely Hooked Me In. & The Bridge... Wow. Quite Beautiful. ^_^

Lots Of Love & Best Wishes
~ xo Secrets
hateandkill-D 2007-02-01 . chapter 1
Not bad. I like this. Nice job! Keep it up!
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