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| Wolfcry-Sama 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abuseThat first verse completely hooked me. Awesome song. |
| half-sketched.staccatos 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abusekonnichi wa I *really* liked the first stanza -- it was my favorite: "I don't mind standing on the edge / but the thought of falling scares me to death / I don't mind standing in the rain / but my fear of drowning shall always remain." "But I fear the loneliness I've always known / I've never known which way to go" -- It sounds sort of like it's repeating because you used the same words in both lines. You might want to change the wording of one of them. A really great poem. :) Zaijen -Shan- |
| The Reverse Edge Blade 2007-03-19 ch 1, | abuseOh, that was a beautiful song! So full of depth. Your words were so meaningful. This'll go in my favorites, it was so beautiful. The Reverse Edge Blade |
| Queerest 2007-03-03 ch 1, | abuseAwesomeness...I wish this were a real song... |
| xo Secrets 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseFirst Verse Conveyed A Lot Of Emotion & Completely Hooked Me In. & The Bridge... Wow. Quite Beautiful. ^_^ Lots Of Love & Best Wishes ~ xo Secrets |
| hateandkill-D 2007-02-01 ch 1, | abuseNot bad. I like this. Nice job! Keep it up! |