Wow, what a great metaphor.
Beautiful, as always!

Interesting methaphor for a guy.

Good poem.

Thanks for reviewing my story "Dancing Among the Flames". I really appreciate it.

Have an excellent day.

~Twilight Starr~

Maybe you should post this in songs. I like the repetition. There's something funny about using the world handle when talking about a boy like that... but chances are I'm just perverted.

BTW, don't feel like you have to review me. I don't have to trade with you, I'd write these nothing reviews unsolicited :).

i never knew the words

Beautiful. Absolutely & Completely Beautiful.

The Metaphor Works Excellently. I Especially Love "And i want you to know, that wherever I go/Your hand is the only one worth holding." Showing Just As Much Dependence On The Boy As Would Be Placed On An Umbrella During The Rainfall.

Honestly Amazing. I Could Never Write A Metaphor Including An Umbrella & Get Such A Response.

Lots Of Love & Best Wishes
~ xo Secrets

even if this *was* just about an umbrella, it would have been just as impactful. but i guess you do end up seeing how children can be simultaneously used and cossetted here. the regret here is very apparant and i does make you think differently. kudos!

I can never really say much about your writing except for how amazing I think it is!