I really enjoyed reading through that. Not only was the staggered effect really.. Well.. Effective? It also made you think more about what was being said, sort of deep down. I love it.

-Clicks on favourite stories- I like. -nodnod-

The poem has a very staggered flow, but it’s executed very well. I also admire how bold you are for your playful use of text effects to give the poem a bumpy texture. It’s not something that attracts my liking, but it done well.

Agadinmar ♠

Interesting how you used so many text effects for different words. It'd be especially interesting if you were able to use different colours, fonts and sizes but I know this site sucks at that :)