Sweet. Really Sweet. ^_^

I Especially Like The Line "there's always something to break even if it ain't bread". Oh, & I Also Adore How You Changed From The More Traditional Royal Characters To Those From Our Era. Very Catchy - Could Get Me Singing This Really Easily.

If People Are Willing To Play It, I'm Willing To Listen To It. ^_^

One Thing Though:
In The Line "thought the word knew nothing 'bout teenage hurts" Is 'Word' Meant To Be 'World', Or Am I Simply Misunderstanding This? Do Correct Me If I'm Wrong.

All In All, Brilliant. Absolutely Brilliant.

Lots Of Love & Best Wishes
~ xo Secrets

Very Well written. Great job!