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Lovedward48 2008-03-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow...that sure was expressive. How an illness can change people. It's good their love is strong. Brian seems to be a very nice guy and Frey is cute. He kind of reminds me of myself when I'm reading GET OUT! I'M BUSY XD (in this case without the get out though^^) I like it and I would write a longer review if it wasn't 4am...yawn I guess I'm going to sleep now! Goodnight!^^
Rock on an Ocean Shore 2007-06-06 ch 1,	abuseIntriguing. Depressing. Sweet. Ambiguous. Detached. I can't believe you can invoke so much at once in the reader. :D
red-headed psychopaths want... 2007-05-03 ch 1,	abuseIt's so sad! But I love it anyway! XD
IndigoNightandRayneStorm 2007-02-20 ch 1,	abuseAw, poor Brian :( Great story
The Astronaut 2007-02-18 ch 1,	abuseOh my gosh... this is so sad. I love how the sorrow in it is so subtle, but still evident. Just after this short little thing I love the characters, especially Frey. Great job. xoxo, The Astronaut
Twinkling Moon 2007-02-05 ch 1,	abuseI wonder what Frey's mural will look like when it's finished. I like this piece. What was wrong with Frey, how was he sick?
Rinna 2007-02-03 ch 1,	abuseThis story is sweet, but reather sad at the same time. Leaves one with a lot to think about, though - Like, what is Frey sick with? Is it something he's going to die of? how soon? What is the mural of? Etc. But it's kind of good that way. The story has a feel like it's not supposed to answer your every question. But yeah. Short, bittersweet, rather poignant if you stop to think about it. I like it. On another note, I hope you feel better soon, in a largely not-physical so much as general-well-being sort of way. It may sound silly, since I'm just some random person who likes your writing, but all the same I'm sorry to hear things aren't going so well for you.
Switch 2007-02-03 ch 1,	abuseThis reminds me of one of my friends. Her brother was going to college and then all of a sudden he had schizophrenia. This seems like a similar situation, I'm taking it? Brian's character is very interesting. It's short and sweet. Well done. ^_^
magalina 2007-02-03 ch 1,	abuseReally good. I loved it. Hope everything works out for you and your mom. Honest. Great work.
Casey.Duh 2007-02-03 ch 1,	abuseAw. To bad that is only a one-shot. It seems like it would have a cute future in this world.
Nikufei Ronda 2007-02-02 ch 1,	abuse...aw. Seriously, that's such bittersweet story. Frey sounds really out of it, and I feel sorry for Brian, although that action was awesome. ;D ...and I'm sorry for your mother. TT We understand if you'll need time, don't worry about it, kay?
Curb Crasher 2007-02-02 ch 1,	abuseSorry about your mother. It was nice. . . . Sorta sad, but not really, you know? Fairly vague, but that just adds to it.
sporkess 2007-02-02 ch 1,	abuseAw, this story makes me sad. It says it's a one shot, and it's kind of perfect that way, but all the same it's frustrating, because I can see so many hints of a long, lovely, and probably heartwrenching tale in there. So while I don't hope for a continuation, really (because I've seen people develop one shots, and it often really spoils them) I wish I knew what happened, and how it's all going to end. Thank you for a lovely little short piece, and have a nice day!
Poker Fish 2007-02-01 ch 1,	abuseSweet and short one-shot. Brian's love/commitment for Frey is admirable. :)
perpetual questions 2007-02-01 ch 1,	abuseIntriguing... Well written. Keep writing.

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