Reviews for The Wizard of Bright Isle

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Weinerdog of Death and Doom 2008-04-19 ch 17,	abuseWow... Amazing, much? Another great story. You have a beautiful writing style, and I admire it very much. Very good story! Too lazy to write long review. -Wd
frolic-horror 2008-03-05 ch 17,	abuseI just read it all in one go. It's such a lovely and cute story and I would love to read a sequel. The action was well paced and the plot was interesting. It's exactly the kind of story I like to read, so thank you for writing it :)
juz-crys 2008-01-28 ch 1,	abusei loved this story.. hope u'll come up with the sequel soon. definitely one of the better stories i've read so far. the characters just feel so real and the story hardly leaves the realm of belivability.
ChronoClockXVII 2008-01-19 ch 17,	abusethat was a good story and i enjoyed reading it
Kumiko 2008-01-05 ch 17, anon.	abuseOh my god I couldn't stop reading, it was so addicting. I'm just left speechless by how wide is your creativity. The complexity with which you thought of spells and species and relationships is just wonderful. It was like eating chocolate, after one small bite you can't stop yourself from eating the entire bar, addicting and leaving you with a content smile after finishing it. Wow, you might consider perhaps making a small book out of this one? I personally think that it would sell pretty well. I must thank you again for pointing me to this story I'll read the other two later today, It's four in the morning right now so I'll catch up on some sleep. Thank you again and I pray your creativity never withers, and that you never stop expressing yourself through writing.
Alia and Elora 2008-01-03 ch 17,	abusewow this story is wonderful, but you probably knew that already. i really hope to see the sequel to this, i want to read more. plus i still want the boys to kiss... i cant help it, i am such a fangirl. I wish i could express my thoughts on the story better, as to give a better review than "oh my what an explosion of awesome" but it is true. I always have such a hard time finding well written, well thought out original stories that pique my interest.the fantasy worlds you create really do that for me (i also read the other two fictions you posted here)... anyway, wow. alia
EncryptionsOfZink 2007-12-10 ch 17,	abuseWonderful story. Looking forward to reading the sequel.
Lunytic 2007-12-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseBrilliant again though a little interupted as my mother was home and she would be shocked and horrified at what i am reading! any how i can't help that i love it. you said in your profile that you write other stuff on another website...WHICH? please say as i would love to read more
Cylara 2007-12-06 ch 17,	abuseI should have reviewed this the day it was posted, since that's when I read it. I adore this story. I'm just a horrible person about reviewing stuff. In any case, everything about this story was excellent, from the writing style to the pacing and especially the characters. It's all very believable. Thank you so much for sharing, and I will keep an eye out for the sequel. :)
Aurisa 2007-10-25 ch 11, anon.	abuseThe relationship of Edouard and Kieran is a bit disturbing... Your description of the story is good though.
Koneikaa66 2007-10-21 ch 17, anon.	abuseI really like this story and thank you for sharing it. I was waiting fot its ending and put it aside for awhile_the wait was quite worthing it. "The fall of the dragon king" had me wanting for more and this story quite met my expectations, I'm looking forward its sequel. I really enjoy your writing, plots and characters so thank you again for sharing.
Thanatos-Eros 2007-10-12 ch 17,	abuseIt's really good
BeneGesserit 2007-10-09 ch 17,	abuseI would have to say that this is one of the best stories in this site. The story was well thought out, there was nothing haphazard about it, nothing done just for the sake of doing. It really shows that MomsDarkSecret loves what s/he does... keep it up...looking forward to the next story...
Wakka02 2007-10-07 ch 17,	abuseUrgh. It's getting a little cloying, are the two of them boys or girls? -_- I know what direction this is leading in but still there's such a thing as being TOO sweet.. Anyway. Besides that little part at the end, pretty much a good chapter, it provides a lot of leeway for future developments. One thing, Kieran is getting a little too powerful.. Just a couple of months (in the story) ago he was some lowly servant who knew only the tips of magic and now he can render any wizard helpless, forever or temporarily. Perhaps moderate his strengths a little, to slow down the pace of the story.. But hey it is your tale. That's just my opinion..
sylenctone 2007-10-04 ch 17,	abuseThis chapter is wonderful as always. I agree with Edouard that Colwyn would be an excellent Royal Wizard while Kieran completes his studies. I don't doubt that they will hit some resistance in the form of other wizards as well as courtiers, the political machinations fascinate me almost as much as the growing relationship between the young king and his loyal rouge wizard. I love that they are each other's reason for their good behavior. Kieran is completely loyal to his king, and Edouard keeps on the right side of morality because he doesn't want to disappoint his friend. It is touching but also a very fragile balance. What horrible things would they be capable of if one or the other were harmed or removed? They seem quite codependent and disrupting that would be dramatic and probably dangerous. I'm also glad that Kieran's peers haven't completely ostracized him. He will need strong allies later on. Which brings me to the fact that I am delighted that you've planned a sequel. I'll be curious to see if the little hints of shonen-ai will grow into something more in the sequel. But that is wishful thinking on my part, yaoi does tend to turn some people off to an otherwise fantastic fic. But I wouldn't complain in the least! As always, thank you for writing and sharing your incredible talent with the web-going public. Notifications of your work in my mail just make my day. Sincerely, Your delighted (and slightly verbose) fangirl, Jessy

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