i love it...

This story is great. You describe things really well and have a big vocabulary. I couldn't find any mistakes in this - I'm a bit outclassed here! Amazing story.

I've just finished reading your story and i must say it was great and i really enjoyed myself Thanks for sharing

Your descriptive writing is excellent. This scene reminds me of the beginning of Eragon, have you read it?

I reread this and I cannot believe you don't have more reviews! Lol. You should really try and publish this series!

ugh these people sound like a bunch of pretenious bastards in waiting specially these so called noble wizards

great story! thanks for sharing!

This is the kind of story I love to read. I don't read anything that doesn't capture my attention, you sir, have captured my attention!

The link between the 2, it's like magnets, but so beautiful because we're looking at 2 children who still have this core of innocence despite the harsh realities of their life. I really like these characters, Kieran's quiet strength & absolute loyalty, Edouard's wisdom before his age... There is also a lot of work done on creating the Wizard's world. No wonder why it's one of my favorites!

I find it really interesting how Kieran is so passive about his future. It makes sense, but it's simply not a common character type, yet this exact attitude is one of the main reasons why the wizards aren't even more afraid of him. Also, it's evident how much he matures in between this story and The Royal Wizard.

Also, Lizette. Since I read the stories out of order, I'm kind of sad now.

Another wonderful story. I'm so looking forward to reading the sequel and seeing what happens with Kieran and Edouard. Justus and Landon are both great characters and I hope to see more of them.

Absolutely wonderful story. Thanks for writing :D

i love your writing style, it's beautiful. your story really played out like a book, many good stories on here are just done in chapters, they don't have that typical flow a book has.

the characters were intriguing, but i never really got a grip on them, they are all still very mysterious.

i'm looking forward to reading the sequel, TWoBI was an amazing read! thank you so much for sharing )

I've just read this in one sitting, and all I can say is that it is absolutely brilliant!

Your style of writing is beautiful. I found everything so vivid, and well thought out/written; and your characters are just so lovely!

Thank you for the wonderful story!

I'm off to the sequel

-Gimlet

Such a marvelous tale!