I dont understand why this wonderful story got no more reviews! It deserves so much more...oh well...
I loved this story tons! Thank you so much for charing your wonderful imagination with us all!

I enjoyed reading your story, but I wanted to point out a few things. Did you realize that you gave us no descriptions of your main characters? Actually the only characters given full descriptions were the two women. I have my thoughts but a guideline would be helpful, not just approximate height, hair and eye color, but an age range as well. They way Kieran and Edouard behave together makes a HUGE difference in interpretaion based on their ages; two 13 year olds embracing could be youthful innocence, but two 16 year olds could be alot more. The only other thing was; I did not enjoy the over done wizard school scenes, they seemed very Harry Potterish and totally took me out of the story.

I remember loving this story and I decided to read it again (so that I can read the sequel, too) and it's just as great (if not more) than I remembered.
I don't think I have anything to say, I just feel like running off to read The Royal Wizard. I have kept wondering about how the two boys will grow together :)

Awesome work! now onto the next story!

Hullo,
I have to say that I loved your story. Usually I'd be a little wary about something that starts off in the woods. Must be from the amount of bad fics I've read starting off with wandering in the dark cold night just after a snowstorm. Eh, but I loved it anyways. It made me feel all warm and giggly inside. I also loved how the relationship between Edouard (interesting variation on the name) and Kieran remained innocent despite what could have been the setup to a very large scandal, if you had so wished it. I was only a little sad that we didn't get to see the madrin anymore after that first innitial meeting, but I have a feeling we will get to meet him/her/it in the sequel, no? The only thing that I felt lacked, and not terribly mind you, it just felt as if it the piece were resigned so to say... Eh, back on track, the part where Edouard confronts Imbario and is thus attacked and revealed. But then again I loved it because it also gave a feel of Imbario's age, which I find amusingly ambiguous throughout the tale. It's a fluff story that I will never gag over from being too pink on the inside. Anywho, I can't wait for the sequel.

A pleasantly surprised new fan,
Murre

p.s. I'll be keeping an eye on you. =)

Wow... Amazing, much? Another great story. You have a beautiful writing style, and I admire it very much. Very good story! Too lazy to write long review.
-Wd

I just read it all in one go. It's such a lovely and cute story and I would love to read a sequel. The action was well paced and the plot was interesting. It's exactly the kind of story I like to read, so thank you for writing it :)

i loved this story.. hope u'll come up with the sequel soon. definitely one of the better stories i've read so far. the characters just feel so real and the story hardly leaves the realm of belivability.

that was a good story and i enjoyed reading it

Oh my god I couldn't stop reading, it was so addicting. I'm just left speechless by how wide is your creativity. The complexity with which you thought of spells and species and relationships is just wonderful. It was like eating chocolate, after one small bite you can't stop yourself from eating the entire bar, addicting and leaving you with a content smile after finishing it.

Wow, you might consider perhaps making a small book out of this one? I personally think that it would sell pretty well. I must thank you again for pointing me to this story I'll read the other two later today, It's four in the morning right now so I'll catch up on some sleep. Thank you again and I pray your creativity never withers, and that you never stop expressing yourself through writing.

wow this story is wonderful, but you probably knew that already. i really hope to see the sequel to this, i want to read more. plus i still want the boys to kiss... i cant help it, i am such a fangirl. I wish i could express my thoughts on the story better, as to give a better review than "oh my what an explosion of awesome" but it is true. I always have such a hard time finding well written, well thought out original stories that pique my interest.the fantasy worlds you create really do that for me (i also read the other two fictions you posted here)... anyway, wow.

alia

Wonderful story.
Looking forward to reading the sequel.

Brilliant again though a little interupted as my mother was home and she would be shocked and horrified at what i am reading! any how i can't help that i love it. you said in your profile that you write other stuff on another website...WHICH? please say as i would love to read more

I should have reviewed this the day it was posted, since that's when I read it. I adore this story. I'm just a horrible person about reviewing stuff. In any case, everything about this story was excellent, from the writing style to the pacing and especially the characters. It's all very believable. Thank you so much for sharing, and I will keep an eye out for the sequel. :)

The relationship of Edouard and Kieran is a bit disturbing...

Your description of the story is good though.