A very moving piece of work. You've mastered the technique of being able to say something that touches our hearts in simply four paragraphs.

I loved it a lot. :) Do you mind if I use it as an away message? (I'll put quotes around it and put Eternally Forsaken's FictionPress) :)

Thanks for always writing from your heart _

It would be a good ending to a book, but it's a bit lonely by itself. I like how the main character relates with the rain though. Very poetic and something I can relate to.

Wow. The protagonist is very deep. Can't wait for the update.

wow, that leaves a lasting impression.. Great writing style! but I'm just curious if it's supposed to change from past tense to present o.o if this is a prologue to a book, it's awesome and you should update it's well written and puts the imagination in motion, just like a television. Brilliant ! :D

FoxyWriter

Sweet and sad. Rain has that effect on me as well. It should rain more often.