This was really..pretty. I mean, I now have a totally different veiw of my windows now. Seriously. I really liked this part:

"Without me, you’d never see
The beauty of the world
You’d be enclosed forever"

Nice job!! :D

Aww, for some reason I feel really bad for windows right now.

I like this poem a lot. I can see a relation between a window and a person who's been mistreated in a relationship, or any person who has ever had their heart played with only to be turned down. It's very sad.

Oh, and the only critism I can think of is that in the fifth stanza, the last line:

"Or the frost sets in, to thick to see through"

--you used "to" instead of "too" the first time.

Other than that, I can't really think of any critism to give you, because quite frankly I think this poem's awesome. Keep up the great work :D.

Interesting. I've never heard of a window poem. Not in this way at least. Very well done. I liked it a lot! Creative definately. Sorry for the fragments. lol!

~Luna~

I really liked the way you worded it and the way it was written. Really very creative and interesting. Well done!