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Reviews For: My Zoë

Hopelessly in Like
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abuseaww, this story is so cute!
Like a love sick puppy
2008-02-10
ch 1,
abuseAW! I really want this to continue!
Killian I
2007-05-16
ch 1,
abuseThe ending is sappy but I wouldn't want it any other way. This was amazing.
my mp3 player is broken :[
2007-04-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseso..i was just hoping you know how much this story rocks.
because it does, you know.
rock, that is.
An Insomniacs Rebellion
2007-02-25
ch 1,
abuseM, delicious. I really like it. It's amazing to have finally found someone else on this pre-teen loaded site who knows how to accurately spell and punctuate a paragraph.

One major reason I like this story: By the middle, I'd completely forgot you'd written it. Normally, when I'm reading a piece, I can feel the author's personality in it. I can smell opinions and taste emotions. But it's not like that here, the characters seem real. Like they're their own people, and you're just writing their story for them.

Spectacular, really. And thank you for the reviews. =)

~An Insomniac
unrequited nin
2007-02-15
ch 1, anon.
abusethis is cute. very, very cute. why the hell hasn't anyone left any comments yet?

i like your writing style.. it's not annoying or unintelligent and it's descriptive and precise without going overboard and sinking the entire thing.

the fact that caitlin's willing to kill her social image for love is a refreshing change -i hate how in every[one of the few FF stories out there..], there's one girl who's willing to walk the mile and the other girl is freaked out.

..i mean...well, yes, that does happen..but it's not like that every time! life is bad enough without adding negative repeatition to it

good job ;]

ps: i like zoe's name
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