Very good story. The mood is very creepy and effective. There was one thing I found that bothered me: when you talk about the phrase, "out damned spot," you noted that it was from Hamlet when it is actually from Macbeth. Just a little help from one writer to another :)

brilliant. This is going to my favorites, you explained everything so perfectly. And how it changed in the end! How the feeling shifts! Anyway, enough gushing. Good work. Oh, and I loved that movie, it was beyond anything I expected from a prequel.

Amazing story!
The title needs a better name, but apart from that, the actual story itself is, just plainly, amazing. I'm looking forward to reading your other stories!

Wow. Gave me chills all the way through. Well worded and well done!