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| HeatherTheVillian 2008-04-01 ch 1,  | abuseVery good story. The mood is very creepy and effective. There was one thing I found that bothered me: when you talk about the phrase, "out damned spot," you noted that it was from Hamlet when it is actually from Macbeth. Just a little help from one writer to another :) |
| Helena Evangelist 2007-02-12 ch 1, | abusebrilliant. This is going to my favorites, you explained everything so perfectly. And how it changed in the end! How the feeling shifts! Anyway, enough gushing. Good work. Oh, and I loved that movie, it was beyond anything I expected from a prequel. |
| ironicdeathx 2007-02-02 ch 1, | abuseAmazing story! The title needs a better name, but apart from that, the actual story itself is, just plainly, amazing. I'm looking forward to reading your other stories! |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-02-02 ch 1, | abuseWow. Gave me chills all the way through. Well worded and well done! |