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| YinYangTwin1 2008-10-03 ch 37,  | abuseO man, I love this story! I can't wait to see what happens next. Julie is gonna meet maja. yay. Wonder what shes gonna think of her. Wel i think I said I'd go back n leav reviews bt I'm not sure if thats gonna happen now. I don't think u car n e way. |
| Middi 2008-09-29 ch 37, anon. | abuseHAha, this story is just plain hilarious, it's so realistic, it's kinda freaky. But in agood way. This is like the most realistic drama romance femme story, that I can think off. Well written as always. Next chapter should be good. Middi~ |
| tainted music 2008-09-29 ch 37, | abuseWow, i didn't realize that you updated, stupid fictionpress alert! Anyway, i loved the pig mating part, it was so cute and funny! |
| Stacey Evans 2008-09-22 ch 36, anon. | abuseOh my gosh this book is amazing!! i absolutely LOVE it!! Please dont stop writing here!! u cant leave us hangin like that! i wanna kno how the rest of the summer goes and then what happens when summers over!! please? lol but sorry i didnt review every chapter... i was entirely too captivated in the actual reading to stop and take a break to review |
| insideoutsidein 2008-09-17 ch 36, | abuseWOw. Wowsers! I just discovered this story and have spent the last two days reading it. You are a BRILLIANT writer. When you wrote the Author's Note saying that you were going to stop writing but then didn't I nearly had a heart attack. NEVER STOP! NEVER! :) This chapter was funny! PAMMY got caught in the act! Yes! |
| YinYangTwin1 2008-09-09 ch 36, | abuseDude I totally owe you some reviews! I can go back and review to some chapters if you like (I was already planning on doing that), but I just want to say this story frickin RULEZ!! I must say Abby does annoy me at times with all her whining but other then that, you have me hooked. The little funny parts (like just now at the end with the whole parents having sex thing) are really something. Halarious in my opinion (my cheeks hurt from the grin I had) Oh yeah and the scene where Abby threw that rocks was classic. I can totally picture that happenin. I gotta say that little piece was probably my favorite part so far. :) I look forward to your next update |
| anon 2008-09-07 ch 36, anon. | abusei wanna see summer tied up ;] |
| tainted music 2008-09-04 ch 36, | abuseWow, erm, i like how you show the wild side of Pam and better still, letting Abby and Stacy interrupt them. Abby really is strung but i like how you bring across the rivalry between Julie and Abby, it's not exactly subtle but it doesn't develop into a full blown cat fight which is actually nice. It really is an enjoyable chapter, a smooth tranisition from chapter 35 and good job on following up on all your other stories too! |
| StickyNote 2008-08-14 ch 35, | abuseah i love the story.. although abby can be a lil frustrating at times.. keep up the good work ! |
| Cheeto Flavored Love 2008-08-08 ch 35, | abuseLoved it! |
| Ixchella Samara 2008-08-08 ch 3, | abuseWow, I am up to chapter three, and love it so far! I need to get dressed, but I'm going to promise myself to read more later. |
| amber 2008-07-12 ch 35, anon. | abusewoot. that's all you get. |
| winterwonderland 2008-07-11 ch 35, | abusenice work! |
| Pirate'sBlackWolfs 2008-07-06 ch 34, | abuse::grin:: i love your story! its so awesome and cute (and hot!) |
| foodfrenzy 2008-07-04 ch 34, anon. | abuseThis is awesome stuff. I couldn't stop reading through all 34chapters at one go. Can't wait for the next update! |