Does the last line symoblise blood? "Crimson reign"... just a thought.
I really like this. It's sad and it flows well with good rhymes. Nice :)

who gave you permission to steal my depressing pills liz? Huh? I know i didn't. Stop WRiting SAD THINGS!

oohh!! This was so pretty, it was sad, but you used such pretty words, and phases, its hard to view this as a some what sad poem..I loved the line though..

"every rainbow needs rain"

its true too, something so pretty comes from rain, something which can put alot of people down (although, personally, i love the rain! ) This was well written! Short and sweet! Keep it up!

~Britney