Oh, this is wonderful! You express yourself so clearly!

I love the flow with the words, and the slight alliteration you used. It makes the poem just flow from the tongue.

It's a wondeful piece!

.:Scarlett:.

What initially attracted me to read this one is that my name is Mary as well. I'm glad I opened it though, because this poem is beautiful. You articulate your thoughts very eloquently. Well done.

One day, I do hope that someone will say the same things about me. This is just lovely.

Wow, your imagery is amazing. Your choice of words were perfect and the way you described her couldn't possibly get any better. Keep up the awesome work! ] -Sara

A very beautiful poem. She sounds wonderful whoever she is ;). Good work!

oh..I absolutely love this! And I love the imagery that you used, and the certain word choice..you relaly did a great job with this, the reader could definitly picture this in their mind..you did great! Keep it up! :D

aw i love this!