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| kimono3kitty 2007-04-18 ch 2,  | abuseAww, you took out the part about thw **...It was one of my favorite parts. I like how Valea is imitating Zela, with the hat and all. (Now I'll have to draw a pictue of Valea with her hat, won't I?) It was well-written and I enjoyed reading it. -K3k |
| kimono3kitty 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuseIt's definitly improved since the first version. Good job! I still love Zela the best (maybe I'm partial to her because I drew her for you...). But any way, it's a good start for Pirate Stry V 2.0 |
| InkandIntrospection 2007-02-02 ch 1, | abuseInteresting concept, very suspenseful. I'm intrigued to see where you take this story. |