Reviews for Broken Soul Born Again

Everything to you 2007-08-11 ch 1,	abuseI liked it a lot. Your descriptions are very vivid. I feel like I can really see whats going on.
Reflection Unseen 2007-02-02 ch 1,	abuseYour descriptions are wonderful. I realize that's not much of a review, but I had to say that. I especially like the dust/feelings analogy.
Aryanda 2007-02-02 ch 1,	abusewonderful imagery!! that's definately your strong point, but the only thing i saw that you need to work on is clarification--there were some parts in the poem that were confusing (but it's poetry, so it doesn't have to make sense). great job!! ~aryanda