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| Youkai Author 2007-02-11 ch 1,  | abuseI really like this poem- mostly becasue oh the fact that it's so abstract. Structural-wise, I like the idea of the three line stanzas. However, it'd be even cooler if there was a pattern to them, such as number of syllables or ryhming. |
| Golddefender 2007-02-10 ch 1, | abuseOk, I'm confused. I guess it doesn't really help that I'm half asleep, though. Something about a broken-winged thing trying to fly and failing miserably? I need help! Don't hit me... |
| Largish Field 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abusePowerful and evocative. I'm not normally into poetry, but this stirred my soul, especially since this poem is a fairly accurate representation of my state last night. (Although I always feel like crap when I stay up to late.) Strangely enough, I felt uncannily alive this morning. In an instant, the secret to life came to me: jumping. Any sort of vertical motion helps. Lamenting does no good, even if it's the only thing left to do. I can't explain why, but I'm happy now. It's a good thing I didn't write this review last night. |
| Princess-anna57 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseWell written. Very sad indeed. :( Always keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |