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| souseiki 2007-11-10 ch 1,  | abuseFreaky! But handled with genius. The phrasings are so clever. I love the whole... anatomic... side of it. :) (especially that icicle tastebuds part, and that gorgeous ending) I didn't really understand what you wanted to say with this until the end- then that lovely "while we run through sun-speckled summer and beyond" part sort of became clearer. Lovely, unique piece! |
| narcissus loved me 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abusenice :) |
| Lachrymosa 2007-03-27 ch 1, | abuseI don't really know what to say... except that this is freakishly beautiful. My favourite part's got to be: "You strum my skin for love and peace, And I will bleed it for you In thick droplets." Keep writing! ^_^ |