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Reviews For: Laughter Vs Age

shamrocks
2008-10-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseso true.

never.
grow.
up.
...
i.
am.
aife.
pan.
=]
fairytale failure
2007-07-02
ch 1,
abuseI love how you present it in such a cute way...but it is really such a deep thought.
Agent Raindrop
2007-02-15
ch 1,
abusewow, i've never thought of it like that before! nice work for thinking that up. It's cute, and very well written.
Windswept Wanderer
2007-02-03
ch 1,
abuseVery nice, original, and definitely true!
maxnotevoltage
2007-02-03
ch 1,
abuseWow. I never thought about it like this - but it's so sadly true. Very profound...

Very well written. I love the way you paralleled the first three lines. Very effective. I'll have to remember to laugh more often...

Blessings:) -- J.max
pukein ivy
2007-02-03
ch 1,
abuseThat was cute and clever. =]
magnusthewolf
2007-02-03
ch 1,
abusevery nice, interesting, and origional concept you have here. i love it. great job :) magnus
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