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| shamrocks 2008-10-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseso true. never. grow. up. ... i. am. aife. pan. =] |
| fairytale failure 2007-07-02 ch 1,  | abuseI love how you present it in such a cute way...but it is really such a deep thought. |
| Agent Raindrop 2007-02-15 ch 1, | abusewow, i've never thought of it like that before! nice work for thinking that up. It's cute, and very well written. |
| Windswept Wanderer 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseVery nice, original, and definitely true! |
| maxnotevoltage 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseWow. I never thought about it like this - but it's so sadly true. Very profound... Very well written. I love the way you paralleled the first three lines. Very effective. I'll have to remember to laugh more often... Blessings:) -- J.max |
| pukein ivy 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute and clever. =] |
| magnusthewolf 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abusevery nice, interesting, and origional concept you have here. i love it. great job :) magnus |