"(God i’m letting you possess me)/as i let you undress me" is gorgeous wording. Flows so easily, feelingly off the tongue. The simple statements of this poem are quite effective in conveying the guilty-for-liking-it-this-way feeling. Good work.

There's something sensual beneath the surface of this poem, and I quite like it. Take care.

interesting and compelling piece...one of the middle sentences caused me to pause but it's no big deal...nice touch with the italice, i think the last one on a seperate line would be a bit more interesting. good job

o. baby that is SO true! i hate it when men are addictive... *sigh* lurv ya chica! _

true.

almost sounds like a song.