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| Osunale 2007-02-12 ch 1,  | abuse"(God i’m letting you possess me)/as i let you undress me" is gorgeous wording. Flows so easily, feelingly off the tongue. The simple statements of this poem are quite effective in conveying the guilty-for-liking-it-this-way feeling. Good work. |
| she smolders 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseThere's something sensual beneath the surface of this poem, and I quite like it. Take care. |
| magnusthewolf 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseinteresting and compelling piece...one of the middle sentences caused me to pause but it's no big deal...nice touch with the italice, i think the last one on a seperate line would be a bit more interesting. good job |
| VELVETxKISSES 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseo. baby that is SO true! i hate it when men are addictive... *sigh* lurv ya chica! ^_^ |
| tuieri 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abusetrue. almost sounds like a song. |