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Osunale
2007-02-12
ch 1,
abuse"(God i’m letting you possess me)/as i let you undress me" is gorgeous wording. Flows so easily, feelingly off the tongue. The simple statements of this poem are quite effective in conveying the guilty-for-liking-it-this-way feeling. Good work.
she smolders
2007-02-03
ch 1,
abuseThere's something sensual beneath the surface of this poem, and I quite like it. Take care.
magnusthewolf
2007-02-03
ch 1,
abuseinteresting and compelling piece...one of the middle sentences caused me to pause but it's no big deal...nice touch with the italice, i think the last one on a seperate line would be a bit more interesting. good job
VELVETxKISSES
2007-02-03
ch 1,
abuseo. baby that is SO true! i hate it when men are addictive... *sigh* lurv ya chica! ^_^
tuieri
2007-02-03
ch 1,
abusetrue.

almost sounds like a song.
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