Very impressive piece. "let lust breed from your cold again" and "let my heart breathe lies" are wonderful whispers of uncontrolled permisions. I can't say that imagery tends to be a stong point/focus in your poems, but "let lust breed from your cold again" is perfectly eye/soul-chilling.

This. Is. Really. GOOD.

Seriously, I've been looking around for some good poetry and this is damn good poetry. The style is crisp and beautiful, it fits the theme and disjointed thoughts of the speaker. The use of italics iis consistant and just, wow.

I really liked it. A lot.

- Noelle

very powerful and touching piece. i love the ending especially. keep writing :)