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| Omok 2008-06-01 ch 7, | abusewow...when you said this sounds like a story completely made out of fiction - that couldn't be any more truer, but I know better since you've told us, that all of these things are true... so...anything else happened after you two...you know, 'out with each other's lives'? xD write another chapter up and tell us. :3 |
| 0.0 NightRiders 0.0 2008-05-13 ch 7, | abuseholy cow you said this really happened? i guess fairy tales really do exist :) if i wasnt a hapeless romantic, then i would kinda doubt the reality of the story, but damn, if this is real wich i dont doubt it is, then damn, you must really have an awesome life, no matter how much sadness there is :( remember we all love you :) youre awesome ciao Sam and ps, i think youre really brave writing this :) |
| chibichoco 2007-08-07 ch 7, | abuseAww... that was so sweet and sad. I hope that you two will meet again or something. Very nicely written. Yeah XD |
| Killian I 2007-03-29 ch 7, | abuseI can relate to so much of this (I'm also jewish and a lesbian). I hate goodbyes so much. |
| Manon 2007-03-28 ch 7, anon. | abuseI loved this tale. I read it from start to finish in one sitting, and I have to say good job. You have a gift for writing, Brianna, and for making the every day extraordinary. Keep it up, girlie. Now, as for your very last paragraph concerning how you feel about the whole event...Do not hold regrets. Regrets are mistakes you did not learn from. And I think it's questionable if it actually was a mistake. If all of those events had not transpired, you would not be who you are to day. Call it an experience. Call it an experiment. But don't call it a regret. Much love |
| sy-wolf13 2007-03-21 ch 7, | abuseI just started reading a while ago but yours is one of the stories i read. I dont wanna write too much, because i spent all my pent up writing energy on reviewing cupids wolf (best story ever no offense! ;) .) so ill keep it short your story was amazing, the ending really almost made me cry, and if i was a girl i would probably be bi right now lol. Just a beutifull story and, hey, you tell it like it is. -Sy-Wolf13 P.S.I'd send you this in message form so that you get it faster, but the site is spamophobic so i cant message people for three days *Shakes fist at sky*. I have yet to compose a work of my own but wish me luck and, by-the-by, itll probably be a femslash :) |
| Anxiety 2007-03-18 ch 7, | abuseWell... that chapter was shorter than I expected, but still touching nonetheless. Now for the slightly more philosophical part: Whether or not it was right or wrong shouldn't matter. My friend has adopted the idea of (trying) not to live with regrets, which is actually some sage advice. Whether or not it was right, you still learned something, and you gained a good friend in the process, so was it not all worthwhile and, thus, right? Maybe what you did was a bit rash, but in this world so much is usually done rashly that it really just doesn't matter. I mean, come on, half of all marriages end in divorce in this country and most of all the abortions performed were due to rash decision making. We are part of a rash generation, Brianna, we are going to make hasty decisions at times, c'est la vie. Carpe Diem; live each day to the fullest. Look back and remember this week with the fondness that it brought, as well. 'Tis better to have loved and lost, than to have never loved at all. Following your emotions is not a bad way to live, as long as you are certain that those actions won't cause greatly adverse reaction that you aren't willing to accept. There is no way you could've lost more than you have gained that week, does that not make it all the more right? Not certain if all of that tangent was exactly coherent and/or on topic, but I have spoken; take it as you will. |
| Anxiety 2007-03-07 ch 6, | abuseSo... do you two still keep in contact? I'm curious... |
| PrettyAwkward 2007-03-05 ch 6, | abuseGood chapter, sad that Helen and Bri are going to end. Can't wait to see what happens. Update soon. |
| Anxiety 2007-02-19 ch 5, | abuseEven as a heterosexual male I gotta say that I hate the kind of people Helen was with. What they did was totally uncalled for. After all this, though, parting must've been such sweet sorrow... sorry, couldn't resist. |
| Anxiety 2007-02-14 ch 4, | abuseWell, this story is certainly coming along interestingly. Normally, these aren't my kind of story, but I find this one quite interesting, perhaps it is because I can relate (to a small extent) more to your plight than most of these kind of stories. Enough of my little rant. |
| PrettyAwkward 2007-02-10 ch 3, | abusegood chapter, things getting pretty interesting. update soon. |
| Anxiety 2007-02-08 ch 3, | abuseInteresting... very interesting... |
| Anxiety 2007-02-05 ch 2, | abuseI'd never thought I'd being saying this to you, but I can actually relate to some of the stuff in here... well actually just the whole Helen thing, though never with someone I just met... I guess I just don't have that kind of courage. But the whole eye thing and bringing a day up just because you talked to her. But I digress, it'll be interesting to see where this ends up. |
| PrettyAwkward 2007-02-05 ch 2, | abuseGood chapter, pretty sweet idea, letting the paper fly out for Helen to catch. It was kul. Update soon. |