Hey, let's get this review started, shall we?

The first thing I can see is that this poem's got a nice, loose and airy flow to it. It's really nice, I think, and makes it easy and fun to read.

"And I wonder why, why... why is it gone?"-I really like the repitition of 'why' in this line. It really presses the emotion on the reader and makes it all the more heart-felt.

"And I see the undercurrent of tension

Grow a little more

And you nod and say that I’m right.

Wise words."-I love this stanza. It's easily my favorite part. I can't quite explain why I like it, though. Maybe it's the sparsity of the last line; the simplicity of it. Nevertheless, I love it to bits. _

Beautiful. Just perfect. I'm so glad I stumbled onto your profile and took a venture to read this. Keep up the poetry, you're really good at it!

Wow! :O So angsty and I love it! You know I can relate to this too...having ppl in my life like that and some I dont even know...but whatever.

I love the story, keep up the great work! :]

this is your first?...well done it's really well written,you should be proud!

There's my problem... It's too easy to make friends on the internet and impossible in person. They always seem fake... But maybe that's 'cause I like people better when I can't see them. _ It makes them so much easier to talk to... and so much easier to let go of when you make a mistake. Lol.