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| smallvillechick92 2008-02-18 ch 2,  | abuseoh i luv chocolate raisins and cant wait 2 read more |
| Ironic Presence 2007-07-05 ch 4, | abuseThe plot content was very entertaining and good (full of sarcasm... gwahahahahahaha >:D), but it's a little rough on grammar. I'll look it over again when your editor supplies you with the new-improved 4th chapter. I like how this story is going... poor Lae, forced not only to go camping, but to go on a road trip and to share a car with Austin! ;) Keep writing! |
| Ashelin 2007-06-15 ch 4, | abuseI love this story! I hope that Lae realizes Max is gay though. Because if she doesn't that could really suck for her. Haha. This is great though! You should update asap. I really liked this. Keep it up. |
| Elle Winters 9 2007-05-26 ch 3, | abuseoh this sotry is amazingly funny.. hhahaha marry choc raisins.. =Z hmm i like austin.. tho i dont lyk the name.. it reminds me of austin powers n he's not exactly hot |
| aslimegreenasalemon 2007-04-08 ch 3, | abuseHa! love it! can't wait for more, and kudos... kudos are kudos, they explain themselves. the little buggers... anyways, great plot line and excited to read more! |
| Ironic Presence 2007-04-03 ch 3, | abuseOh, yes, I did love this chapter--you titled it "Sarcasm Is My Best Friend". How could I not love a chapter like that? I loved the beginning, when Lae is screaming, "AH!!" and then she says, "well, you said pretend..." It reminds me of the sort of relationship I have with a girl in my school, except she's not my best friend... Um, when she's saying, "Hi to you too Daniel. It’s nice to know that I’m not invincible.", I do believe you mean *invisible*, not *invincible*. I love how you call that guy "it". And the "sexy bed hair" thing... priceless comment. "Oh, Sarcasm, how I love thee." Of course, I loved that line. Update soon! This is so priceless. Oh, and thanks for the review on that other poem--it really makes my day to know that someone likes my poetry and can relate to it. Fare thee well. (Sorry, I felt like being random) Sarcastic Presence |
| Ironic Presence 2007-03-31 ch 2, | abuseFirst off, I have to congratulate you for keeping it realistic. The first chapter was really intense. The second chapter was hilarious. “I will not go within 30 feet of that raisin killer!” ...was my favorite line. Still laughing inside. :) Awesome. I want to read more. On a side note, I updated "An Ecstasy". Thanks for the review! Ok, bye now. Presence |
| Gentle. Edge. 2007-02-20 ch 2, | abuseaw, timothy's a jerk. =P this sounds so interesting and like hilarious. |