   ElevatorMusic 2009-09-12 . chapter 6Yay! ^^ I'm annoyingly happy that you've added new chapters and I'm stil eager for more. |
 lscott 2008-04-26 . chapter 4 I love this story. It seems you tried a cliff-hanger, but I dunno, it didn't really work. Still, i want to read the next chapter! Maybe if you had put that last sentence in the next chapter instead? I dunno, I'm no writer haha Look forward to the next installment! |
| ElevatorMusic 2008-04-11 . chapter 4 Awesomeness! good job. |
 sousie 2008-04-01 . chapter 4" A lot of trouble " if you ask me
anyways it's a great chapter update soon |
| xBlackSoul 2008-04-01 . chapter 4 nice, nice, nice chapters.. update ASAP! |
| ElevatorMusic 2008-02-02 . chapter 3 Oh mystery!
...cool
please update
BOA |
| sousie 2008-01-20 . chapter 3 can't wait to read more |
 firegoddess372 2007-10-07 . chapter 2EXCELLENT! Please update soon I love it and can't wait! |
| Fli 2007-08-30 . chapter 2 I agree with the book. HOW RUDE, BUNNY! You left me hanging! AUGH! D:< But on ANOTHER note rofl This really seems to fit your style. It flows really well, and makes you get tense at all the right moments haha though of course... your spelling could use work, per usual |
 ladydragon93 2007-06-01 . chapter 2Oh, a cliff hanger, you are not nice!
I enjoyed the chapter however, can't wait to read more. |
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sorry i didnt read sooner i had a huge migraine the other day.
i'm a bit confused about the water and knife...nice small little cliff hanger
Can't wait for the next chapter!
BOA
(formaerly known as MercifulAngel) |
 D.Grey Man 2007-05-21 . chapter 2Hmm...I'm filled with intrigue and suspense as to the three men, who I am guessing are vampires, and to the ring. For some reason when I read this I picture a strange union of trinity blood and howl's moving castle. I know my thought process is weird, but then again so am I. |
 C.Sabbadin 2007-05-21 . chapter 1Every time a new person speaks you start a new paragraph.
You had some grammatical errors and I believe I saw some misspellings. |
| D.Grey Man 2007-05-21 . chapter 1 definately liked it. u really need to write more! |
| ElevatorMusic 2007-02-09 . chapter 1 i'm a HUGE vampire genre fan and this is really good please write more! |
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