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| Osunale 2007-02-11 ch 1,  | abuseIncredibly impactful. The Excalibur and Krptonite allusions are perfect for this piece. Need is expressed in contrasts of strength and fragility in these words. Wonderful. |
| she smolders 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuseIt's hard when your weakness is someone else, I should know. Take care. |
| Kusje 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed this oh so much. 'I can't pull you from your heart of stone' hit me strong. Lovely, simply lovely :) |
| Frore 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuseA concise, meaningful poem. Very conveying of sincere devotion. Remember to capitalize "I" for future works, but that is just a mechanical nit pick. Keep writing! |