Interesting. I'd like to see retrospection go back further in time, such as recalling a significant memory between the brother and sister, when things were better. Maybe starting with the "Dear Sis" quote, too.

*tears...*

what happened? why did he kill himself? what's wrong with the family?

I guess it might be too late for me to give you a hug, but... *hug*

i liked the line in parentheses (at the time) and the note was really powerful *hugs you* i'll give you a hug:)

sniff sniff. It is very sad. I am sorry for the people u knew.
Hershey's kisses and MM's to u.

It's so sad but really good. Once I go into highschool I know there are going to be a bunch of my classmates who will commit suicide. I just hope its none of my friends
VIRTUAL HUG!

Very powerful and intense. Painful even. Well written. Nicely done.

That's sad, especially the letter at the end. It seems the older brother character really thought he was doing the world a service, but he wasn't, if that makes sense.
Well done and best wishes.

*hugs* Prettiful. I loved it.

Wow, powerful, touching, painful, moving, beautiful, agonizing. You got it. Very well written. Hugs.

damn, this story scared me for a second x

Very beautiful, yet sad, story. *hug* I liked the ending letter the most... good job and I'm sure its because you wrote it from the heart.

depressing sad stories are the best! I love this

That was really good. Really good man keep up the good work man :D

You poor thing. Here's a million hugs for you, honey.

That was really good. It was extremely well written. I feel really bad though that that happened to you. I think that part sucks but the story turned out nicely. Wish I could have other comforting words for you but I really don't. I can request a song, though. It's called Zero by: Hawk Nelson. It's about someone commiting suicide. You would probably like it. It starts out:

"Your life dreams are shattered. You're gone away. We've cried here for hours. The hours turn to days. I know you regret this, leaving us here. With portraits and memories that we've held so dear. When I here your name, it's not the same. No matter what they say, I'm not ok..."

That's the first verse. Anyways, I really hope things improve for you. Keep writing. That always makes you feel better.