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| Michael Kim 2007-02-05 ch 1, | abuseIt's nice to see that you've turned your passions into writing poems, although it saddens me to realize that there is this kind of pessimism and secularism out there in the world. These are sad times indeed. Thanks for your review for my poem by the way! I think it's my freedom to write a poem without punctuation though. (They're just dots and points and lines; they don't control us.) I've got nothing more to say. Have a nice day. |
| penguinfragger 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuseThis was great! You juggle between supernatural metaphors and reality excellently. I loved the imagery of the cascading shells and the blood drenched roses. Very good poem! |