Nice ^^ I like how it ends on a dime and how you really get the feel for Terrance.

Again, an interesting piece showing great potential. This is early work. I don't want to rush you. All I'm trying to do is to let you know exactly what you are capable of now and what you will someday be capable of in the future.

interesting and a nice quirkyish short story. Terence needs more solidity, just feels a bit 1 dimensional.

This was kind of strange but really interesting. I really liked the character and language. The only thing is that it doesn't feel like this leads to anything, and in the end, it doesn't really. Also, the ending is unclear. This was fun to read though!