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Reviews For: Roses and Rings

VolleyballGurl212
2008-06-17
ch 1,
abuseThis was cute. I noticed, though, that at first you describe Jack as having deep brown hair and bright green eyes, but after the page division/break thing (e.i. the line across the page, i'm not sure what you would call it...) you say he has honey eyes and raven hair. Not a big problem but I just wanted you to know.

This story as well as the rest of your work is amazing! keep up the good work!
vballgurl
2008-06-06
ch 1,
abuseHOLY CRAP! that was an AMAZING first sentence! Can I steal it?!?
and sappy is okay :)
Laura Schiller
2008-03-03
ch 1,
abuseAww...a nice classic romance never goes out of style. I like the language too.
milenaa
2008-02-15
ch 1,
abuseWell, it's a Valentine's Day one-shot, it's supposed to turn out this way, isn't it? nice writing.
Inkhearts and Inkstains
2008-01-08
ch 1,
abuseI like this one to, your good at oneshots.
StarSplit144
2007-02-14
ch 1,
abuseJack, the air-force officer eh? Yeah maybe a little sappy, but its valentines day. Have some fun
~StarSplit
Callisto Jean
2007-02-11
ch 1,
abuseWhat can I say other than wow? So here goes...

WOW!

It was very sweet and realistic. I can imagine everything so clearly in my mind. It's almost as if I were Beth herself.

You did a wonderful job. You must be very proud of this piece!

Oh, thank you for reading and reviewing my story. I hope you'll find time to read the others since Cruising Green Waters will be coming to a drastic end soon. :)
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