it's... beautiful.

-EB

great idea and presentation, but you switched the descriptions of Jack. In the beginning he has brown hair and green eyes and in the second description he has honey eyes and raven dark hair. Just thought you might want to know.

This was cute. I noticed, though, that at first you describe Jack as having deep brown hair and bright green eyes, but after the page division/break thing (e.i. the line across the page, i'm not sure what you would call it...) you say he has honey eyes and raven hair. Not a big problem but I just wanted you to know.

This story as well as the rest of your work is amazing! keep up the good work!

HOLY CRAP! that was an AMAZING first sentence! Can I steal it?!?
and sappy is okay :)

Aww...a nice classic romance never goes out of style. I like the language too.

Well, it's a Valentine's Day one-shot, it's supposed to turn out this way, isn't it? nice writing.

I like this one to, your good at oneshots.

Jack, the air-force officer eh? Yeah maybe a little sappy, but its valentines day. Have some fun
~StarSplit

What can I say other than wow? So here goes...

WOW!

It was very sweet and realistic. I can imagine everything so clearly in my mind. It's almost as if I were Beth herself.

You did a wonderful job. You must be very proud of this piece!

Oh, thank you for reading and reviewing my story. I hope you'll find time to read the others since Cruising Green Waters will be coming to a drastic end soon. :)