 Paola 2009-11-18 . chapter 9 Allo.?.
Are you still alive.?.
Will this ever be updated.?.
can you please message me when you get back on fictionpress at
Please don't let this be the end of this epic piece.!. |
 Olga 2009-11-06 . chapter 9 I love this story, I hope you update it soon. Thanks. |
 igot4 2009-11-01 . chapter 9I so agree with everything that THROUGHSHADOWNSFALLING said. You are a great writer, You got like 605(well now including me) 606 reviews. this is obviously a loved story. Its my fav. out of all your stories its so well written. I would absolutely love for you to continue with it. Please give us an update soon. Dying to know what happens next, like does Ana find out and if so how does she feel about it? And what about Bethany & Mike is he really serious about her? Also Talon want see what he's all about too. Oh! And when they go to her house for the weekend will they get closer, kiss maybe:) Oh I cant wait! UPDATE SOON PRETTY PLEASE! |
 throughshadowsfalling 2009-10-25 . chapter 9I know the likelihood of you taking this review seriously, is probably unlikely. But I wish you would, because it would be completely ahh-some if you did. I really like your story and trust me I don't just say that to everyone. I'm very picky, but you're a great writer, I can see that. It's also likely that you've had reviews just like this one I am writing for more than a year and yet you still haven't updated another chapter. Which leaves me to guess that this won't make a difference to you because you're probably still getting reviews like this. However, I think you have a really good plot going for you and if you picked it up again, you could make a huge run with it. And since your writing skills are amazing, I would suggest that you make the most out of it. Honestly, your talent is like none that I have ever seen. You have a way of making the reader connect with the character, because said character is fun, quirky, weird, funny and so on and so forth. I really hope you finish the book, because I would extremely enjoy reading it.
Well, if you take my advice and DO write the story, I will be extremely happy.
If you don't, ah well, it is your story anyway and the writer can choose what he/she wants.
Have a good life!
Oh...and p.s.- I love your story! |
 Shereads48 2009-10-05 . chapter 1 Writing in first person always seems hard to me. You do it brilliantly and I look forward to the next chapter. I have just started reading this story. |
 Bangle Meister 2009-10-01 . chapter 9I absolutely LOVE the characters! How Willa thinks is so funny, and strangely, reminiscent of how I do too. They're so cute, and I love the father tension here
PLEASE UPDATE SOON |
 asfdg 2009-09-01 . chapter 9Sweet. Interesting. I like your writing style. This hasn't been updated since last year though, so... do you think you're going to finish this? |
 ghurl00 2009-08-24 . chapter 9your story is a champion! i cant wait for the dinner chapter! it'd be madness! total madness! i dont like ana, btw. lol. she's a **. bethany is adorable in her own rocker way:) and spencer?? he's spencer. like him.
keep up:))
update soon, ayt? |
 MyNameIsJustine 2009-08-12 . chapter 8I love this story so far. ^_^ And I love Switchfoot too. My favourite songs from them are "The Blues" and "Awakening."
I think I might be your six hundreth review for this story...sweet. Great Job! :D |
 AzA.vee 2009-08-11 . chapter 9In love with this. Please update soon :) |
 proud-rider-of-the-short-bus 2009-07-31 . chapter 9LOVE IT!~! UPDATE SON! |
 heavenly-princess- 2009-07-30 . chapter 9Hey please update! I Love this story! |
 frizzy 2009-07-26 . chapter 9Amuing - she's so oblivious. Update soon! |
 Kellet 2009-07-21 . chapter 9He is so different from Roth, except for the obvious love for the oblivious girl, and yet I'm in love with Spencer all the same. Seriously, you make the most lovable, insane, hilarious and real female protagonists ever. Please keep writing, wherever you are. |
 MadameBeauteous 2009-07-16 . chapter 9Love your story and I can't begin to understand as to why it's discontinued *sigh* |