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Chidori Nadare 2007-08-16 . chapter 1
Wow, I have too much thoughts about what this haiku means. It seems that a 'beautiful' girl shows her real face to everyone (Porcelain beauty unwraps) and that she keeps on searching for the right path. (Wonderous eyes keep searching/Words break in silence). *faves* A thoguht-provoking and lingering haiku.


-C.N
simpleplan13 2007-03-06 . chapter 1
I love the imagery in this piece... an amazing job
Basara 2007-02-06 . chapter 1
adoration...

nice...
AllyCred 2007-02-05 . chapter 1
So many memories come to mind, i like that, this poem has such a lingering affect - It just stays with you.

I will never forget it!

Lotsa love
~AC~
strawberry memories 2007-02-04 . chapter 1
i love the word "porcelain" tucked into your poem. very dramatic, and it gives your lines a pearly-white backround. lovely.
Elenute 2007-02-04 . chapter 1
That was very eloquent. I have no idea what it meant, but it was lovely.
magnusthewolf 2007-02-04 . chapter 1
this leaves much to linger on the readers mind...nicely done :)
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