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| Chidori Nadare 2007-08-16 ch 1,  | abuseWow, I have too much thoughts about what this haiku means. It seems that a 'beautiful' girl shows her real face to everyone (Porcelain beauty unwraps) and that she keeps on searching for the right path. (Wonderous eyes keep searching/Words break in silence). *faves* A thoguht-provoking and lingering haiku. -C.N |
| simpleplan13 2007-03-06 ch 1, | abuseI love the imagery in this piece... an amazing job |
| Basara 2007-02-06 ch 1, | abuseadoration... nice... |
| AllyCred 2007-02-05 ch 1, | abuseSo many memories come to mind, i like that, this poem has such a lingering affect - It just stays with you. I will never forget it! Lotsa love ~AC~ |
| strawberry memories 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abusei love the word "porcelain" tucked into your poem. very dramatic, and it gives your lines a pearly-white backround. lovely. |
| Elenute 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was very eloquent. I have no idea what it meant, but it was lovely. |
| magnusthewolf 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abusethis leaves much to linger on the readers mind...nicely done :) |