Wow, I have too much thoughts about what this haiku means. It seems that a 'beautiful' girl shows her real face to everyone (Porcelain beauty unwraps) and that she keeps on searching for the right path. (Wonderous eyes keep searching/Words break in silence). *faves* A thoguht-provoking and lingering haiku.


-C.N

I love the imagery in this piece... an amazing job

adoration...

nice...

So many memories come to mind, i like that, this poem has such a lingering affect - It just stays with you.

I will never forget it!

Lotsa love
~AC~

i love the word "porcelain" tucked into your poem. very dramatic, and it gives your lines a pearly-white backround. lovely.

That was very eloquent. I have no idea what it meant, but it was lovely.

this leaves much to linger on the readers mind...nicely done :)