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annne 2009-11-26 . chapter 13
I am really enjoying this story. I also I loved the comment about 10 things I hate about u my favorite movie I miss Heath too :( please update soon
ghurl00 2009-11-07 . chapter 13
I ove this story! It's great, the pace is just right. The characters blend really well. Update soon?
igot4 2009-11-05 . chapter 13
Ok, so I said in one of my reviews for your story A Lesson In Love 101 was my fav... Well scratch that THIS ONE, is now my fav. I love your writing when I can fell every emotion you write about ... Thats good writing to me. Your very talented ... MY GOHSH I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! I know you have a life besides writing all day but as a big fan of Javier and Rosie I beg you to please please hurry with the next update... and its ok if you make it a really really long chapter :o)
Igot4 2009-11-04 . chapter 10
WOW! I cant believe he's going to do all three...
Have question, I don't think I got a good description of Rosaline can you tell me what she looks like I always love to have a mental picture of characters I read about. I don't know if I missed it or what, but I don't know if she's black, white, or oriental all I got was she had straight hair.
igot4 2009-11-03 . chapter 8
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!
Duuude 2009-10-16 . chapter 13
Thank you!
You FINALLY updated! And I don't really remember much or what's going on really (I'll have to re-read) but it was amazing! I love Javier! L-O-V-E. LOVE HIM.
please don't take a year again. :)
shesaidhesaid 2009-09-27 . chapter 13
Definitely one of my favorite stories on FictionPress. I really admire how real you're able to make your characters seem so real and relatable. I also like the fact that Javier and Rosaline aren't portrayed as perfect, straight-laced characters. It's nice to see that they're flawed, just as any regular person would be. I'll definitely be on the edge of my seat waiting for another update. Hope you find a muse you can hang onto!
pattEcake 2009-09-18 . chapter 13
UPDATE. NOW. OR ELSE.
dandering 2009-08-31 . chapter 1
i can't even begin to express how enormously happy i am to see this story updated! it was literally the high point of my day :)
Bookflower 2009-08-24 . chapter 13
I've been reading through all of your stories, under both pennames. I really enjoy your writing, and I love that your characters are so honestly flawed.
I really understand Bree though. When someone that close to you attempts suicide, it's not something you're going to forget. It runs through your head for years later, even when they have just about sorted themself out and are happy now. It's still scary - it's something you never really get over, I think. It's not something you talk about any more, but it still bothers you. And when you hear your mum going really sombre on the phone, you still get jittery, because it brings back memories you wish you didn't have.
So yeah, the cases are rather different, but I get why she won't leave it alone. I really do... But I wish I didn't.
And please countinue with this... I'd be very sad if it sat un-updated for another year.
Bookflower
miss-life 2009-08-21 . chapter 13
Is it really sad that this update made my day?
It is. I know it is. =/
It's just that I find your stories very refreshing and good, so they suck me in. :D
I'm not going to rush you to update, take your own time! (Just don't discontinue the story :( PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!)
I've really missed Javier and Rosaline and this chapter was great!! I can't wait the big confrontaion and getting to know Jeremiah was amazing too. He sounds like an okay person ;)

Have a great day,
Tina
righthere431 2009-08-18 . chapter 13
Come Rose! Talk to Javier!
ileum 2009-08-11 . chapter 13
This story's good. I love Javier's character.
rebmetpes-86 2009-08-10 . chapter 13
Glad to see you're still working on this story. I really want to see what happens to "St. James" and Javier lol. I'm one for sporadic updates too, so I completely understand. Sometimes I can sit down to the computer and type up pretty much the whole chapter in no time at all. Other times it takes me a lot longer. A part of me really wanted Rosaline to take the first step and at least knock on his door this chapter, but of course I will have to (im)patiently wait for your next update :P

I did really appreciate the backstory explaining Rosaline's sourness towards men. I really agree with what her brother said, that she's still not over Joe and thus she is seeing Joe in all the other guys of the world, including Javier. And I really like the fact that this time it seems to be the girl that needs the most transformation rather than the guy and the fact that it is the girl that thinks she is the high and mightier one and has to learn that maybe they she's not as far above him as she previously thought.

Quite a lengthy comment, but in this case the words just flew from my fingers. Hope to have another update soon.
Smile Back 2009-08-10 . chapter 13
I'm So glad you're back!
Even if it is just a chapter, I love reading whatever you have to write =)

I loved the conversation between Rosaline and her brother =D
Also, the whole background information really helped understand her character. I cannot wait to read the next time Rosaline and Javier talk!
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