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| felicia13 2007-05-11 ch 1,  | abuse"intoxicating and nostalgic." Great line. Just ... really, really great. The whole thing zings of 'true love' sort of circumstance. Oddly endearing (I don't usually go for these sorts of love poems) and warm. I like warmth ... Felicia. |
| riotmaker 2007-05-06 ch 1, | abusei love this. you write with beautiful simplicity. [plusfavorites]. ♥ |
| Elenive 2007-03-08 ch 1, | abuseI can feel this as a perspective from a child whose brother or family member is spinning them in circles until they get dizzy. Maybe this is a memory. Either way, "intoxicating and nostalgic" work perfectly. Great piece. Sorry it took so long for me to review. |
| Synn s 2007-02-08 ch 1, | abuseIt's not bad!! Intoxicating my mind, don't you? jejeje p.d. forget my english please... |
| perpetual questions 2007-02-06 ch 1, | abuseAh, just beautiful. Keep writing. |
| poetic abortion 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuse"Your voice in my head, enveloping me." -- Jesus, that line is fantastic. The whole thing just flows; it's stylistic and sweet and romantic, pretty. Well done--this is beautiful. - Noelle |
| Smoky Bear 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuserefreshing and uplifting. |