Oh, my. This is a very twisted story, but I like it. It's rather interesting. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

That. Was. Disturbing. I loved it.
Keep it up.
Chloe

o.O that's kinda deranged. I love it! but i think you could have put more detail in place and characteristics. and also you could built up their relationship more. the sad part is- i could see myself doing that T-T

Alice and Art- it's brilliant! kudos!

That was a dark and creepy story. I really enjoyed it. At least, he got to draw Alice.

~SirScott

This is wonderful, my kind of story. Dark, but in an enchanting way. I like the tone, and that last line... that last line steals the story. Characterization and imagery are lovely too. I love your use of things associated with innocence surrounding Alice, from the name itself to the hair to the blue ribbon. My only complaint is that there are some grammatical things that could be fixed, but it's nothing major.