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PhaithMcCoy 2008-03-07 ch 1,	abuseOH! Creepy...but I loved it. I want to read more about Edom. And, just curious: why did you want Caleb dead?
henny's deviant 2008-01-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseholy fuck a moly that was kinda messed up espesialy the knife in the ass...but i love knife play soo coolio
BrdomIsTheDvl 2007-11-18 ch 1,	abuseo.o OMG I feel scared for Caleb! O.O Knife up the ass...that's seriously got to hurt! >.
Centi the Yaoi Hime 2007-10-19 ch 1,	abusetwisted little puppy Edom is. I kind of knew through the whole story he'd lose it but I expected it to be a little more aimed at the heart instead of the lower quarters. Sorry I cant hep but think that bit was a little funny...despite the seriousness of the story.
xXHaunted CookieXx 2007-07-18 ch 1,	abuseyou think it was rushed? it didn't feel that way.. but maybe that's just me.. oh well hands you a cookie yaay for cookies, and yaay for this. mild creeperieness, but very overpowering (in a good way :D) and...i want to say sensual..but that's not quite the right word. very something. the only reason i think sensual is because it's so descriptive and it just made me...feel. bleh, this review makes no sense.. shrug good work though :) xXHCXx
Sparks Of Steel 2007-05-23 ch 1,	abuseHaha I finally read it! Edom needs some drugs to calm him down and Caleb needs to get a spine! It was sad at the end though, "Don't you love me?" That part was sad...all in all pretty good! I think you would die, but like you said it does depend on how big or how sharp! You get an A+!
EverettDKearton 2007-05-21 ch 1,	abuseWow. I love your stories o.0 This was perfect XD I love angsty little pervy oneshots XP The way I picture the ending is... Caleb would die and then Edom would freak out and become all depressed ^^
DarkestbyDay 2007-03-19 ch 1,	abuseIf he got a knife stuck up his... uh, you know, then he probably just passed out from pain or blood loss. A knife isn't gonna kill you. That happened to my dad once... Not the knife up the as, but a guy came into the ER where he works with a knife stuck in that particular spot. He did it himself, too!
Osunale 2007-02-19 ch 1,	abuseWow, that last bit is painful to read. A little scary too. I love how you keep me on the edge of my seat through this. Incredible. Your writing has continually grown more complex, and this story really reaches a new height for you. Your skills with the language and the pacing, the plot and the characters are incredible, really. This story just blows me away. It's beautiful. A little sadistic, yes, but...just wow. Haunting, wonderful work. Sometimes I wonder, if you're producing work like this -now-, what will you be writing a few years down the road? You have such amazing potential as a writer: I hope that you never stop with this.
Jordan 2007-02-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseONE question.. Edom has got to be atleast a little attractive right? And he must have a decent job if he can pay rent and buy groceries etc. So why do they meet with him sleeping in an Alley? Okay so parts of this may have reminded me of someone in a very light sense. Caleb means dog huh? that figures. the fact that you used the name caleb and this story reminds me of someone.. so. "Tears burst to my eyes, blossomed and bloomed until their liquid tendrils nipped at my hot cheeks." Youre such a writer.. like I read that sentance and I was like "god damn". Its so perfect and complex for meaning something so simple. Youre incredible. Parts of it were very hott, parts of it were very scary. I liked it. New SN by the way.. lustflbittenlips. After I had it I realized both our SNs mentioned lips.. sorry. This was not an attempt to copy you. I love you.
Pegasi51 2007-02-08 ch 1,	abuseWow... I never thought I would like this kind of story (never read one on edgeplay before this... in fact i had to look it up to find out what it was to begin with) but wow that was creepy and (dare i say it?) erotic as well. As for your question, the knife's size plays a major role but any sharp object thrust into places it shouldn't be thrust into will cause infections in the wounds and lead to high levels of systemic toxicity. Also blood loss is a major player. These wounds, however, are easily treatable (as in like mortality levels are low) and it is possible to heal (physically) completely from them. Emotionally? I'm not too sure. But seeing Edom's character I highly doubt rushing Caleb to the ER will be a major priority for him so I believe Caleb must have died eventually. And have died a very painful, slow death. You are one mean person. How could you do that to Caleb?!?! To kill him so brutally? That is horrible! But I love your stories! Keep writing! And I would love a sequel to this story, maybe have Caleb healed but running from Edom or something and Edom being the evil scary, yet oddly hot, character that he is will chase him down and then? More edgeplay!! You have made a monster out of me. T.T See ya!
CaFFy 2007-02-07 ch 1,	abuseAww. =[ I liked that. Am I demented? =D
the sacred night 2007-02-07 ch 1,	abuseWow. Usually I'm not into that really hardcore S&M stuff, but this was oddly hot. Something I've kind of had a secret fantasy about for a while now, although I know beyond a doubt that I wouldn't enjoy it in real life. A lot of fantasies are like that, unfortunately. Perhaps more of a warning is in order, though, for those who would be shocked a frightened by it... or maybe moving it to adultfanfiction dot net (it takes original fiction, too, even though the name doesn't say so). I liked it, but then I'm 20 years old. There are young kids on this site that might get permanently scared off sex or something, who knows. Was this by any chance inspired by what I told you about that story with the genetically modified sex slaves called 'pets'? I just kind of wonder because apart from the word 'pet,' there are other similarities. The 'pet' in the story is owed by an S&M fiend who abuses him, first of all, and he also has red hair. I just wondered if you read the story and got inspired by it, because that's cool.
Khali Draegan 2007-02-06 ch 1,	abuseYeah, I've heard that... Maybe I should make it into something more thinks deeply yeah, i cant get on myspace much, and i hardly get on my anime one now anyway. add this one k? no im not dead, though i feel it...
Cookie Gestapo 2007-02-06 ch 1,	abuseWow, how strange. It was a good story. To your question about dieing if you get a knife stuk up your ass the answer is yes and no. Like you said, it depends on how big the blade is, how deep the cuts are, how many cuts there are and if you get them to a hospitol right away. Some times if you don't get them to a hospitol and can become severly infected and they can die from that, or blood loss. The pain would probly help move that along too. If you get the person to a hospitol quick enough they can actually clean the wounds and give you some stuff that your supposed to rub inside of yourself. I thik that they can actually sew some of them up too. I dunno. I read a storie like this before and got curious so I looked it up. Weird, I know.

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