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Blossom 2007-07-08 ch 12, anon.	abuseWhat a great story! I think I've figured it out, but I'm not positive I have it right. Maybe Nicki could help me figure it out later tonight. I never was good at solving things. I love their apartment though, and the fact that they live in an old theater. :) I can't wait to read the other two stories!
Amagumo (too lazy to log in... 2007-06-22 ch 12, anon.	abuseI just finished reading this yesterday and I really liked it! I actually beleived Nicolas' idea of them being dead, too! I think it was a good idea for him to have! It would've been an interesting turn out, I'll tell you that. But it's a good thing they're still alive so they can be cute together!
Nicki 2007-04-19 ch 12, anon.	abuseWow! That was awesome! I loved this story! This chapter was really cool too. The way you ended it was perfect. The feel and the flow of it was perfect as well. You did a great job with this story! Fantastic job! Bravo! applause ;-)
Nicki 2007-04-19 ch 11, anon.	abuseUh oh! Oh no, Nicki! I hope he isn't cut to ribbons! Great chapter though. I can't wait to find out what happens!
Wackobunny 2007-04-14 ch 10, anon.	abuseWait, they're dead? But then the girl... GAH! I'm so confused... Anyways, nice description, nice suspense, you maight want to add an 'a' before chest in the fifth paragraph. I loved how you reworked the earlier chapters to fix up Von's personality. It really helped to flesh him out.
Nicki 2007-04-09 ch 10, anon.	abuseWow. This is so good. I mean...they're dead...I DID NOT see that one coming! This is really getting good. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! Please update soon! Keep up the great work!
Jay, of course. 2007-04-07 ch 10, anon.	abuse! Well, I must say you took a good idea and ran with it. I love the set-up, the imagery and the whole atmosphere you've created; I keep looking over my shoulder at the slightest noise, that's how freaked out I am! But I do suggest that you proofread more thoroughly - remember, a text editor won't pick up words that aren't misspelled but just used improperly (hear and here, for instance). Uh...what else...Nicki's characterisation is good, but I sometimes feel that it's a little inconsistent. That could just be part of the story, though. I like Von's characterisation a lot - it's realistic, three-dimensional and very believable. (And I will review the other chapters when I next have time online, okay?)
Orange Blossom 2007-04-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseOoh, a poem! This is an interesting opening to the story. I'm still not exactly sure what the story's about, but I'm definitely intrigued and will keep reading! Great job!
Nicki 2007-04-03 ch 9, anon.	abuseWow! Okay, seriosly...that was awesome! I mean, I was a little worried there for a second that you took the easy way out and did the whole, everything was a dream thing...but no you made it even better with ending it to Von waking to glass breaking. I seriously loved this story. It was really freaky and weird at times but really entertaining to! I loved the description and the relationship of Von and Nicki. I just really really enjoyed reading it! That was a seriously awesome story! Keep up the great work!
Nicki 2007-04-03 ch 8, anon.	abuseOkay...that girl is seriously creeping me out. The chapter was really good though. I did't even think of reading erom reven backwards. That was really good. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Hopefully everything will come together.
Nicki 2007-04-03 ch 7, anon.	abuseAnother awesome chapter. In this one, I really loved the description. I loved the description of the rain and especially of the darkness and candle light. Really great job with this chapter. I really loved it!
Nicki 2007-04-03 ch 6, anon.	abuseGreat chapter as always. The story is getting really intense. I definitely know what Von is feeling...basically having no clue of what is going on...and I love it! The whole blood thing was really creepy...but so is the little girl. I can't wait to see where this is going!
Nicki 2007-04-03 ch 5, anon.	abuseVery nice climax. Your story seems to get better and better. I have no idea what's going on and I love it! I feel horrible for Nicki though...poor Nicki! Hopefully it will end well for him and Von. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Nicki 2007-04-03 ch 4, anon.	abuseAnother great chapter! The fic is unfolding really well and I can't wait to find out what's happening to Von and Nicki. Some definite freak stuff is happening. I love it! I also loved the last line used for this chapter..."Von was shaking now, from a different sort of chill." I just really liked that line. Great job!
Nicki 2007-04-03 ch 3, anon.	abuseAnother awesome chapter! I'm loving the relationship between Nicki and Von. The description and wording is really great, and I'm really likeing were this story is going. The whole thing with the crows is pretty cool, kind of creepy, but cool.

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