haha. i like that line; "You know you love me." suprised he didn't stutter, blush and deny it all.

Cute! A few spelling errors here and there, but on the whole it was really good. :D

Perfect...except if you didn't have that one B* word, then I would be able to recommend to all my friends and family. I loved your style of writing. Keep up the good work! But next time, please don't resort to profanity.