this one is so good too! I love you haikus! (hopefully I spelt that right, lol) I have never been good at writing really short poems, but you are amazing at it! ^_^

This haiku seems to talk about freedom (Brush back you wings/Leap for the open skies...) but in the end, it takes a turn and the thought turns into immortality or freedom from misery (Pretend you can't die). Well done!


-C.N

I really love that last line... great job

...it's either going to succeed or a failure...

nice...

I like this.
It would've been nice if you had written a series of haikus for this one, since it seems open-ended. But that gives the reader more room to fly. :)

I like this very beautiful and has a very liberated feel to it!

Well done!

Lotsa love
~AC~