Lovely! It's such a short, relatively simple poem, but the words are very expressive and completely true! I'm sure many of us feel like the narrator at some point(s) in our own lives. It's a very nice piece. The lasts lines, especially, "So I lay in the scenary/Behind the shining stars/And hope one day/I'll stand where they are" is wonderful. Full of unwarrped emotion. Simple, beautiful. Elegant in it's simplicity.

L. Kantenseter

Wow there are not many people that actually say they have never been kissed. i love the poem keep writting you have done a wonderful job.

Very good. Kind of sad. And I find myself able to connect to it greatly. Especially the boyfriend part, though for me it is that of a girlfriend. Thats probably why I like this poem, I feel I could have written it myself, If I could write poetry. So keep up the good work. And good job keeping the poem flowing.