So.. very... random... I LOVE IT! It's the kind of thing i would write! (See "The Boy" by Ms. Critic if you don't believe me, and yes, I am the other person she said that helped write it) wow i got oof topic. ill try not to do that again heh heh. anywho, i liked it.

LOL! That was great. It's a shame that I can't put it in my C2 because of all the brain-sucking action and how I want to keep my C2 family appropiate. But I did REALLY like this and I didn't see that ending coming, it was TOTALLY random even for you!
Write on!
Pen.Dragon

YAY FOR BOB FOR SAVING THE WORLD! GO BOB!

lol, that was SOO random! I love randomness.

XDD

This was very funny! I'm gonna read the sequal now.

okay

This is a reply to Ms Crictic,
OK I dont care what you say, "Little H" could never write this story no matter how hard she tried, this story is five steps ahead of her, and thus we can see that mabey a twelve yaer old could mabey write this story, but not a seven year old.
Double A

Um...

That pretty much sums it up. Lots of punctuation errors, and this seems like a story little H. could write! (and she's only 7) Keep trying Bobby!

Yes!


Okay, now onto the Shrimp. Very awesome. I can see this being made into a really huge, epic movie. like War of the Worlds, only better...and without Tom Cruise. I'm gonna go and read the sequel now.

~Reaper

Ok, I just had to review it again. I mean after my lame first review and all the things I just noticed when I reread it, ya. So ANYWAYS

I saw that you fixed the carp thing good for you.
One question though, where did he get the lasagna so fast?!

well other than that your story rocks very very funny.

Bye! Keep writing! Double A

LMAO!! i was just ** myself :P I loved that it was hilarious! NO NOT THE SHRIMP :P x

oh wow, that was stupidly funny, I like the fact that it was lasgna that killed the shrimp, and at the top you got a typo,

"...and all that carp!" I didnt know that carp was involved.

When did you start posting storys?

Anyways cool story realy great loved it gotta go

Keep writing DA

Well, well, well; Mr. R.E.D. posted something, hmm? And not just that, but the Killer Shrimp saga too.

Gosh dang it, I hear that thing way too much. I'm guessing Silly Sam gets a piece of the action too?

The opposite of this being an episode of Garfield, right?

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... you're F-ing kidding me, right?
I mean, I know it must be hard to be lurking in the shadows of a fantastic, MATURE writer...
... but seriously...
... you're kidding, right?
b.