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Osunale
2007-02-11
ch 1, 		abuseThe last line is gorgeous. It's lines like "i’m wrapping up these sweet little slits/with sly caresses and fleeting glances" that truly show off your talent - showing off both your command of sound and brilliant use of description.
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