awesome story. love it!

i really like where you're going with this story! keep it up!

well, a really nice story, a little confused with so many characters and their love life mm. keep on updating :)

awesome story. it's kind of cool how you're mixing sex and gore, and twisting it into a sort of erotic...thing. i thought it was really creative how u made ur own language. tootles, love ya! keep writing! ;)

Yes, a vamp story. I like how you made up your own jargon. Cool as hell.