I really love this.

you should come back. i always did enjoy your work.

this is great, its really moving and i can really relate to it...

even just reading the title, i knew that this would have a perfect ending line. i really am impressed by this poem and the meaning it gives in so few lines. you're talented, i should definitely read more of your work. keep it up!

You know that someone is a great writer when they can write something so simplistic and yet have so much meaning to it. You're one of those people. :] Major props.

You're talented.

That last line really tied the whole thing together, I like it.

no. don't ruin the laugh and junk.

I like the simplicity in this. It's very to the point and that also adds to its likeability.

That's completely dark, and twisted, and totally humanistic! I like this work, it really shows what we all are afraid as people to admit we think. Write On.

-Shookie Smiles Sweetly