 muzikall. 2007-08-05 . chapter 9haha! I love how you named the ** Chastity Demure. :D Great story! |
 blondiexoxo 2007-07-07 . chapter 10aww dont be mean i wanna know what happens with all of them/ |
 Norma Porma Worma 2007-07-06 . chapter 1Write more PLZ! |
 His songbird 2007-06-10 . chapter 8Good NIGHT! *winces* My humblest apologies for the tardiness of this review...
As I've expressed before, the mysterious Mr Enderly is the one that captures my fancy...hands DOWN. As for Shane's little 'diplay' in the bathroom...for me that was nothing short of CREEPY. *shivers*
Anyhoo, I'm excited to read about tonight while she and Mr Mysterious are alone. I mean the chemistry that seems to positively course between them is utterly ELECTRIC.
Rock on then! I'm off!
Farewell for now...*smiles and waves* |
 His Quirky Girlfriend 2007-05-16 . chapter 8Woo! I haven't reviewed in... ages.
Anyways, I love this chapter, as always. But I do think that the last one was better.
I want to know what Rayne's done, though! Tsk-tsk, you'll have to let us know sooner or later.
:-P
Without Wax,
Stephanie. |
 pleasebequiet. 2007-04-29 . chapter 7i think im going to try the bra tactic when i get a guy friend. hahahahahaha |
 His songbird 2007-04-28 . chapter 6Oh, please forgive me for being a rather sucky reader and not reviewing! You think you can get away with it... Alas *hangs head in shame*, you simply cannot.
I LOVED this chapter actually! I quite enjoyed getting Shane's thoughts on everything. Absotively HYSTERICAL and utterly *ADORABLE*...
Yet my curiosity about this Enderly character is MOST piqued at the mo'...
Shall be looking forward to more... |
 R.F.Y. 2007-04-28 . chapter 6im startin to get very interested in this...
good job
Chrome |
 His Quirky Girlfriend 2007-04-27 . chapter 6I'm reviewing! I'm reviewing!
Update? :-P
'Kay, so I only just started reading this story, but I'm hooked and dying to know where Rayne fits into all this...
Is he related to Dana or something? I don't think that Dana's gonna stick with Shane, but you never know...
Well, YOU know, but I don't.
So update! And then I will!
Steph. |
 mickeyyearbook 2007-04-27 . chapter 7I tried reviewing your story a couple days ago but my computer was being a douche and wouldn't let me. Anyways I love your story and the way you are able to combine comedy with romance. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see all of your talent shine through in chapter six! |
 pleasebequiet. 2007-03-19 . chapter 5WAIT! WHAT ABOUT RAYNE! NO! RAYNE COME BACK!! AH!update! |
 His songbird 2007-03-18 . chapter 5*blushes* This is a most dynamic development... I wonder how the alluring Mr. Enderly fits into this picture. *giggles*
Curiously waiting for more... |
 His songbird 2007-03-18 . chapter 4*giggles* I like this Rayne character; he's just peculiar enough to be rather alluring... I'm curious to see where this goes.
Waiting for more... :P |
 pluie etourdie 2007-03-18 . chapter 5I like it so far. Dana and Shane's relationship is rather sudden. It feels like maybe they should say something a bit more direct about it. Acknowledge they're both into having one rather than just acknowledge to hide it. It's a small thing. Overall, it's quite enjoyable. |
 Miz Em 2007-03-02 . chapter 4I like it but honestly I don't think I'd keep reading if someone turned out to be a vampire (only because I started reading it in a romance, not fantasy-type mindset). Keep goin' though! ^_^ |